Hi all,
My name is Aleksandr Rozentsvit. Here is the two assignments that the professor asked for:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-DFPvK16Ur8eDRqbGRKUkNQbzA/edit?usp=sharing (poem about my favorite area in NYC)
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-DFPvK16Ur8YjBFT1A3bmFtU3c/edit?usp=sharing (my writing spaces)
photographs of writing spaces will be up tomorrow.
ENJOY!
Reading your poem has so many visuals and I felt as if I was there. You showed me a map in your poem and I as a reader to follow great poem. The only thing I suggest was to give your poem a title.
ReplyDeleteAlvin,
ReplyDeleteI should give it a title maybe called "A journey around Midtown"
My thoughts:
ReplyDeleteYour poem was spot on about midtown, New York. As a person who loves going to Manhattan, I can say that how you described it, reflected very well on my trips there. From the halal carts, to the bright lights that light up the dark sky in manhatten, as well as the citi building I always see on the 7 train, the description was on point.
My Favorite Part:
The description you gave on the traffic jams, really funny thinking about it until your there at the moment.
your poem was very descriptive and more like a picture then a poem. i just think it would have been more appealing if it looked like poem, just me. other than that it was good.
ReplyDeleteIt was good, seemed simple to me but you could never go wrong with simplicity. I do feel it could be a bit more descriptive.
ReplyDeleteI liked your play. It was creative how you portrayed such imagry of new yorkers sight seeing. It was a joy to read it. I didn't see a title and you need to fix grammer errors.
ReplyDelete