Monday, June 9, 2014

Final post thoughts of the course

Since this is not on the syllabus but I want to write overall thoughts of this course:

This course was the best one ever! I loved to write expressive stories, share thoughts, and I really enjoyed it. It had boosted my creativity levels sky high. I will continue to write creative stories especially my newsletter "USA Yesterday" which is popular with my professors. I will miss this course a lot but will cherish the moments of what other students wrote. Even though I lost the creative writing contest which was a huge bummer but I will not give up. I find that not many deaf people do not know lots of puns. I am lucky to have a special gift to know puns and playing with the English language syntax.

So farewell you all,

Aleksandr Rozentsvit

Sunday, June 8, 2014

Play/Video feedback

I showed this to a tutor and this what the tutor told me:

"YOUR VIDEO AND PLAY WAS BORING! I DID NOT LIKE IT! NOT ONE BIT!"

Just kidding. The tutor loved it. He told me that he felt that the play was hilarious feeling that the play could be on a big stage production. He loved how creative I was with the characters and the sound effects added. Also the cabinet pun was hilarious. Because the cabinet meeting was actually taking place in a K-Mart cabinet and that gave a good twist to the English structure. He was floored of how much irony I used and the blending of current events to make the story funny. My video clip was amazing and the tutor really enjoyed it. He was touched by how much I want to be a deaf interpreter in the future. It was amazing to hear that kind of feedback. He also enjoyed reading my newsletter too.

My video!!!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-DFPvK16Ur8NDlHS3dBTlA5Mzg/edit?usp=sharing

My video clip signed in ASL. It is not voiced so don't panic if you think there is something wrong with the computer

For those whom are ASL impaired: I added a transcript here.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-DFPvK16Ur8UVZ6V1BXTG8wNDQ/edit?usp=sharing

Revised play

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-DFPvK16Ur8d002ZGs0MTV5WHc/edit?usp=sharing

Sunday, June 1, 2014

Photos from the events that I went


 The play that I went. A deaf play which was really good!

 My former English teacher Russell Kane now a professor at Nassau Community College. Told stories about his deaf life and he is HILARIOUS!

 I met Bello Nock at New Victory Theater. Went on a special backstage tour. On the right is one of the best interpreters in NYC Candance Penn.

 Forgive the blurry photo. I met Luke Adams the guy whom raced on The Amazing Race three times! It was interesting to hear his story.

Poem revision/reflection

Here is the poem revision

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-DFPvK16Ur8QW5fZ1R0c3gtNzQ/edit?usp=sharing

I find it interesting that I'm not a poet nor a lover of poetry. People told me that my poem is perfect little flaws there. One person told me it was more of a map than a poem. I love Midtown but the problem is that there are too many things occurring in Midtown and how can I cram in there. It is like in a supermarket you cannot cram all of the products in one roof right? You have to kick out some products to make room for new stuff. The tricky part is how to make the poem sounds new and modern than using boring same old grind like slower than a turtle. Needs to wake up and perk up the poem itself. When I read a poem sometimes I get bored and not bothering read it. But sometimes the author tricks the reader thinking it a story but it actually a poem. For example Maya Angelou wrote many poems and it is inspiring to read those. Touchy and poems have to be adjusted for the right audience.  Sometimes audience can vary in English skills and the poets have to match the levels. My poem is pretty good English but if I was telling along to the younger audience I have to change the level of the poem.